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Oh Beautiful Stranger, please, let us meet again.

Just another cold night, alone. My brother - the best friend a man could hope for - was going to a show with his lady. They were a fine couple, both of them too childish and in love for their own good. I had only myself, my thoughts, and my bleak future.
I was overcome with a craving for something hard, refreshing, to help keep my mind from wandering into those looming shadows that haunt us all. I crossed the street from my humble home, through the merciless snowy dark, to the warmly lit pub. I entered with a harsh gust of frozen air at my back, hoping to find my quiet escape empty as always.
My hopes went unanswered. Two young women, roughly my own age, sat at the bar. One of them, a larger, thickset lady of strong features turned to look my way. Nosy? Curious? Desperate? I wasn't interested. I took my usual seat, and without so much as a whisper, the tender served me my usual. I sipped it in silence, grateful the strangers down the bar were content not to start up any sort of conversation.
Hours passed, dragging on like the centuries, in peaceful muteness. Slowly, my potion took it's effect, guiding my thoughts from their inevitable demise and simply letting them relax into a blur of wasted memory.
Later that night, the larger woman approached me. I looked her over. She asked me the time. I checked my pocket watch and, to my surprise, it was long past midnight. When I looked up again, I did not meet those dark, brown, dull eyes. Instead, I was met with eyes of a deep, sapphire blue. They were large, piercing, unrealistically beautiful. In that moment, the blur of my thoughts became a diamond-edged blade. In a flash, I remembered who I was and why I sought the comfort of the bottle I still held: I was a soldier, a murderer by career, a man doomed to a short-lived fate. And I was alone in that end.
Somehow, the large woman managed to strike up conversation, and she sat to my one side, her blue-eyed companion to my other. I could never recall what we chatted about, for I was still long lost in those crystal-blue oceans. Oceans half-hidden by brown bangs that had sneaked astray from her simple style that hung short, just below the back of her neck. I was captivated, prey cemented to the spot by the gaze of an unstoppable predator.
And a predator she was. Elegant, graceful, silent in her movements, hardly disturbing even the dust in the air with a brush of her hair. Her shoulders, sloping gently, showed an inner strength that her outer beauty belied. She never spoke, though I would have willingly paid any impossible price to hear her voice. Her eyes did all the talking, their depths bespeaking a millenia of wisdom.
To my displeasure, the larger woman brought the conversation to an end, albeit some time later. She left, her friend following without question. I watched them leave, and my breath was caught, for the blue-eyed beauty was marked. A long, pale scar ran down her back, trailing along her spine, revealed to me by her back-less top. It was not an ugly mark, however. On the contrary, it only emphasized the elegant curve of her physique. It left me with an immense curiosity, my now re-cluttering mind reeling with wonder.
She blessed me with one final glance over her shoulder as she donned her large fur coat, instilling me with a feeling of a temporary goodbye. At that moment, I knew we would meet again, and my depression eased. The door closed silently behind them, and once more, I was alone.
Just myself, my thoughts, and my hopeful future. Oh Beautiful Stranger, please, let us meet again.
©2008-2010 ~HauntedWolf
:iconhauntedwolf:

Author's Comments

Anybody who knows me well enough can tell you right away that this is FAR from my usual style of writing, so please forgive any typos or distasteful errors. I'd usually be the very last person to ever write anything in first person, or purposefully vague like this.
And yes, I left out details on purpose. I was . . . Very inspired to write this all of the sudden, and it wasn't something I could convey in my favorite way. So I did my best to keep it vague to deliver the feeling of an antiquated memory.
The inspiration actually struck earlier this afternoon, when I went out for lunch(yes, right across the street). I had a strange hunger for Wendy's. Not even my favorite Rusty's pizza could change my mind - which is an absolute first. So I went to Wendy's! And what do I see when I enter? Two young women, about my age. One of them rather large, the other thin and about my height(just under six feet).
I had to try very hard not to stare, the second girl was so gorgeous! And not in that "zomg lookit teh barbie wit all duh makeupz lawlz id du her" kinda way. I mean like that . . . Truly beautiful kind of way.
They got up to leave and the larger of the two stopped to ask me the time. There was no conversation, but there was that surpised eye-contact. It really did leave me breathless, and I was already inspired. I watched them leave, and the mark on the girl's back left me even more stunned. I never thought a scar could be so . . . Attractive. I don't mean that in a sick way or anything, it's just that it added to her obvious character.
Oh, what I'd give to have a chance with her. I know I'm probably blowing this way out of proportion, but just the way she looked at me for that split-second left my head filled with words that seemed so ready to flow together.
Please, luck, please, for once, be on my side!

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:iconcountess-granola:
That is quite possibly my favorite piece by you and knowing the inspiration behind it makes it so much more appealing. Best of luck to you. I would love to know if the story continues.

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"Don't do it, Brendan! I don't love you, but I'm sure someone does!"
-Tomato on convincing Brendan not to kill himself (jokingly)
:iconhauntedwolf:
Chya, me too.
But judging by the way things are going for me lately, getting my hopes up would be akin to committing suicide.
There's a reason I titled this Hopeless.

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Where there is Hope, there is Despair.
The only Defeat is in Surrender.
:iconalygolightly:
Jeeez Spencer I didn't know you were so good at writing! That was really great! I was getting into it! You should make that a full fledged story if you ever have the time to and a good idea for it. Cos I was diggin it!
:iconhauntedwolf:
Wow, thanks! ^^
Like I said, though, that one's totally not my style. I'm actually working on another story that's completely different. It's another attempt at a different style. Hopefully it'll be up soon!

--
Where there is Hope, there is Despair.
The only Defeat is in Surrender.
:iconmelocardio:
Wow... I'm loving this! Wish a guy thought MY back scar was attractive...

And, I would have never known this wasn't you native style- its so gracefully written!

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"Its inevitable; when you grow up, your heart dies..." -The Breakfast Club
:iconhauntedwolf:
All scars are beautiful to me. Be they scars of the flesh or a gash in a brick wall. Everything has a story, and scars are proof that one happened there. But I'm a hopeless romantic like that. xP

And thank you so much! Just one of those times when it feels like your muse hit you with a truck, yah know?

--
Where there is Hope, there is Despair.
The only Defeat is in Surrender.
:iconmelocardio:
Indeed, I do understand, my friend! Some stories not only need to be told, but rather much demand it.

Yes, I see that you are a romantic. But, alas!- I have often expressed this same view of scars, this same tendency.

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"Its inevitable; when you grow up, your heart dies..." -The Breakfast Club
:iconhauntedwolf:
Ahhh, symbolism . . . <3

--
Where there is Hope, there is Despair.
The only Defeat is in Surrender.
:iconmelocardio:
Yes! It is my favorite tool of figurative language.

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"Its inevitable; when you grow up, your heart dies..." -The Breakfast Club

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